Writer FAIL

So, last week I submitted those two ideas I mentioned, and later, a third idea for a video segment (the fake iPhone commercials). All three of these ideas seemed to go over not terribly with the writers who commented, so I decided to take the initiative to write a first draft of my Twilight sketch. I posted it Thursday night and felt really good about myself. I’d written a sketch, by God. On Friday, no one had commented on it but I could see a couple had viewed it. I checked back over the weekend and got my first sketch criticism.

They said they’d tell me when my ideas, jokes and drafts sucked, and boy, did they. I’m not gonna lie, even though I was prepared for it, it still smarted. My heart plummeted when I read the feedback; my draft didn’t have enough jokes, and the one joke I was most proud of was deemed a desperate attempt at shock value and unfit for the stage. Can you imagine me writing something so offensive it’s not stage appropriate?

I know I got too cocky, too early on. I also didn’t try hard enough, and at the very same time, I tried far too hard. I should have sat on my draft for a couple days rather than immediately posting it, and I should have been much more thoughtful about it. I shouldn’t have tried to live up to the other female writers’ reputation for writing the most offensive jokes, because that’s not my natural writer’s voice. I’m just beginning to worry that my natural writer’s voice might not have the sense of humor I imagined.

The thing is, this is the hard part. This is where I take what I wrote and completely re-do it and make it better. This is what they said would happen. This is the part where I move forward and try harder and write better jokes. This is where I plead to my writer’s group later tonight to let me bounce some lines off of them.

Also, I failed miserably at my weekend experiment to not spend any more than fifty bucks. I blame Mozart’s, but really I blame my overwhelming desire to drop everything and run to Target when I realize I’ve lost my sunglasses and also pick up a new pair of shorts while I’m there. I still know I’ve got enough cash to survive a weekend in Chicago, but I can’t help but have traumatic flashbacks to the Colorado trip when I unwittingly placed a non-budgeted $150 deposit on a bike I borrowed for two days. Vacations are the times when a credit card might come in handy.

2 thoughts on “Writer FAIL

  1. Hi there,

    There are two things I’d like to share:

    1) Credit cards are made by the Devil! lol Seriously, do everything you can to avoid owning or using a credit card. You’ll only be a slave to the bank for the rest of your life if you don’t.

    2) I don’t think you should consider the writing experience you mention as a failure. You have discovered one way not to go about things in the future. In other words, all you have to do is change your approach and keep changing it until you get the result you’re after. I think that the best way to do this is simply to be yourself.

    All the best,


  2. Hey.
    Whattsa matta U?

    At least you wrote something, instead of endlessly talking about writing something.

    And, you put it out there and got hammered. So what?!?

    Next time, you’ll know better. And there’s nothing that says being foul is not your voice. It’s all in how you say it.

    Rita Rudner is the most gentle, and sometimes foul comedianne out there. She cracks me up, especially when she delivers a punch line. Think about that.

    Also: get a prepaid credit card with a $500 limit that you can refill when needed, but your limit is always well gee $500. I don’t know what your debt situation is, but for young folks, I think that’s the best way to go.

    Trust me: I spent 36 years in debt. Nobody told me this; I had to figure it for myself. Cash is the best way to go, but when traveling, a credit card is very helpful.

    Listen to your auntie. :0)

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